made several changes to guides to comply to doc conventions
“Speed not required” is not a sentence
Gb should be GB
added a , after floating IPs
fixed sentence around “To implement a true multi-node test of Swift
since it did not make sense
removed extra underline line after Machines
removed capitalization of service names to comply with docs conventions
https://wiki.openstack.org/wiki/Documentation/Conventions
changed to DevStack for consistency throughout
Change-Id: I531bf6b2bad62fbf9d1417b2b1ce06de3715e0f0
diff --git a/doc/source/guides/multinode-lab.rst b/doc/source/guides/multinode-lab.rst
index d963243..b2617c9 100644
--- a/doc/source/guides/multinode-lab.rst
+++ b/doc/source/guides/multinode-lab.rst
@@ -262,17 +262,17 @@
Swift
-----
-Swift requires a significant amount of resources and is disabled by
-default in DevStack. The support in DevStack is geared toward a minimal
-installation but can be used for testing. To implement a true multi-node
-test of Swift required more than DevStack provides. Enabling it is as
+Swift, OpenStack Object Storage, requires a significant amount of resources
+and is disabled by default in DevStack. The support in DevStack is geared
+toward a minimal installation but can be used for testing. To implement a
+true multi-node test of swift, additional steps will be required. Enabling it is as
simple as enabling the ``swift`` service in ``local.conf``:
::
enable_service s-proxy s-object s-container s-account
-Swift will put its data files in ``SWIFT_DATA_DIR`` (default
+Swift, OpenStack Object Storage, will put its data files in ``SWIFT_DATA_DIR`` (default
``/opt/stack/data/swift``). The size of the data 'partition' created
(really a loop-mounted file) is set by ``SWIFT_LOOPBACK_DISK_SIZE``. The
Swift config files are located in ``SWIFT_CONF_DIR`` (default
@@ -334,14 +334,14 @@
set in ``localrc`` it may be necessary to remove the corresponding
directory from ``/opt/stack`` to force git to re-clone the repository.
-For example, to pull Nova from a proposed release candidate in the
-primary Nova repository:
+For example, to pull nova, OpenStack Compute, from a proposed release candidate
+in the primary nova repository:
::
NOVA_BRANCH=rc-proposed
-To pull Glance from an experimental fork:
+To pull glance, OpenStack Image service, from an experimental fork:
::